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posted by brant at 5:30 PM
I think that this is a really nice piece -- one that deserves to be revisited and continued. I would like to see you post your thoughts having gone through the process of making this piece; what do you think; what would you do change....I think that some of the transitions are unnecessary and move to fast as does some of the narration. You should allow us to revel in this story a bit more -- you are taking us on a journey, let us enjoy it.
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