for Harry
Vlog for video storytelling class.
Producer/Writer/Narration: Brant Karmen
Research Assistant: Maurice Karmen
Inspiration: Harry Tkatchuk
Producer/Writer/Narration: Brant Karmen
Research Assistant: Maurice Karmen
Inspiration: Harry Tkatchuk
posted by brant at 5:30 PM
2 Comments:
I think that this is a really nice piece -- one that deserves to be revisited and continued. I would like to see you post your thoughts having gone through the process of making this piece; what do you think; what would you do change....
I think that some of the transitions are unnecessary and move to fast as does some of the narration. You should allow us to revel in this story a bit more -- you are taking us on a journey, let us enjoy it.
I really enjoyed looking at your site, I found it very helpful indeed, keep up the good work.
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